SEETHE.....
Scorching heat, withered soul
gazing beyond the wide horizon
fallen deep down the gaping hole
trying to rise and then be gone.
Rumbling grief builds upon
waiting to unleash the terror within,
rising waves wreak havoc on
plague and misery then break in.
Whispering deep within itself
the embittered one rises from the muck
knowing what it itself
is not a question of lady luck.
Ever considered as a freak
in an ocean full of shells
like the blinding lightening streak
not far from boiling hell.
Clouds are torn apart and shredded
sunlight just wanes away
entire ocean is then flooded
when the one thing holds it way.
Friday, July 07, 2006
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5 comments:
frankly am impressed....dint know u think so deep...pretty good for a first timer unless u have more tucked in ur sleeve rite now!
Hello Mr.Poet... keep the verses coming
hmmm good for a first timer
Liked the last paragraph.
---pops
i think this is good for u... atleast it will stop u from taking it out on ppl. yeah i know...confidence is nice, but what about backing it up?
--guess?
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